http://red-satin-doll.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] red-satin-doll.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] beer_good_foamy 2013-10-16 07:40 pm (UTC)

Riiiiiight. Because in one, you sit alone in your room, pouting and thinking about what's wrong with you, and in the other... well... uh...

That line alone made me laugh as hard as anything in the fic itself Maybe harder?

And the idea of Dawn ending up being the shanshu'd vampire is a stroke of GEE-NEE-US.

Great job- fun story and fun commentary!
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