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beer_good_foamy ([personal profile] beer_good_foamy) wrote2009-05-18 08:00 am
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Descend drabble

For [livejournal.com profile] open_on_sunday's challenge "Descend" and [livejournal.com profile] writercon100's challenge "Fall." I'm efficient sometimes.

A Calm Sea Does Not A Skilled Sailor Make
Post-Season 6

"Ladies and gentlemen, we are beginning our descent towards Heathrow. Please fasten your seatbelts and return your seatbacks to their upright position."

Giles glances down at the city far below as the jumbo jet banks and dips its wing. Beside him, Willow hasn't moved or spoken for hours. Now she grips the armrests even tighter, her knuckles white.

The plane lurches, falls a few hundred feet, as if remembering that it's heavier than air. "Ladies and gentlemen, we are experiencing some slight turbulence. Please remain seated."

Giles puts his hand on Willow's. She doesn't relax, but the plane lands safely.
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[personal profile] ladyjane 2009-05-18 07:06 am (UTC)(link)
@_@
Remind me to stay faaaaar away from Willow when she's upset.
*dives for safety of cupboard*

*peeks out*
Did I forget to tell you?
LOVED IT!

[identity profile] beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com 2009-05-18 07:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!

And hey, there's always the possibility that it's just ordinary turbulence... ;-)
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[personal profile] shapinglight 2009-05-18 07:58 am (UTC)(link)
As a nervous flyer, that makes me - well, nervous. Very good, though.

[identity profile] beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com 2009-05-18 07:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Hehe, I sneakily tap into people's fears and exploit them for fic. :-) Thanks!

[identity profile] mrs-underhill.livejournal.com 2009-05-18 01:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Ouch!
And for Willow, totally plausible. Ouch again.

[identity profile] beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com 2009-05-18 07:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Yup. Thanks!

[identity profile] angearia.livejournal.com 2009-05-18 10:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome. Love it. There really needs to be more plane!fic. I'm working on my own fic chapter which will make it so. ;)

[identity profile] beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 12:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! This is actually part of a longer series of drabbles I've been working on for some time... maybe I'll even post the rest of them before the decade is over. :-) Gonna read your latest one, too.

[identity profile] angearia.livejournal.com 2009-05-20 06:46 pm (UTC)(link)
This is actually part of a longer series of drabbles I've been working on for some time... maybe I'll even post the rest of them before the decade is over.

What's the series' main theme?

Gonna read your latest one, too.

Hey! I didn't know you read any of my other stuff. You must be one of those silent ninja readers.

[identity profile] beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com 2009-05-26 07:30 pm (UTC)(link)
What's the series' main theme?

Giles and Willow in England, and their past and future. There's a couple more here (http://beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com/36728.html) and here (http://beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com/27761.html#cutid1); I just never manage to get around to tying them all up into something coherent.

You must be one of those silent ninja readers.

Sorry. :oops: I suck at both reading and commenting lately.

[identity profile] zooeys-bridge.livejournal.com 2009-06-17 11:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Your Willow/Giles post-Grave snippets are just marvelous. There's just the perfect amount of tug at the ol' heartstrings without being over/melodramatic. Instead it just lingers in my brain and thumps in my heart.

Especially the drabble thats linked in the comments where Willow asks if it'll hurt much. Wow. Just wow. Less is more and especially in that instance. That one I've honestly been thinking about all day. You should (please?) write more and/or if you know of other stories similar, would you mind illuminating your readers? Kthanks.

Bravo again. Truly.

[identity profile] beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com 2009-06-27 10:27 am (UTC)(link)
Belated reply, sorry. But thanks so much! I do have a few ideas for some more drabbles about Giles' and Willow's trip to England, I'm hoping to get them done at some point.