I love this! I love how you weave together Cordelia's wit and Fred's physics-y goodness, and how shaping the story through this dual lens makes the two of them make so much sense. And I love how you brought the boys in at the end, another reminder of the not-Pylea that Fred lives in now.
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Date: 2015-06-22 07:48 pm (UTC)I love this! I love how you weave together Cordelia's wit and Fred's physics-y goodness, and how shaping the story through this dual lens makes the two of them make so much sense. And I love how you brought the boys in at the end, another reminder of the not-Pylea that Fred lives in now.
Great work. Thank you!