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Here's a drabble that popped into my head and seemed to fit today's
open_on_sunday challenge ("Twist/Plot")
Survival
Once when she was 12, Sam Zabuto lost Kendra in a crowd.
He found her staring at a group of dancers in front of a flatbed truck with an old-fashioned sound system blasting bass-heavy music; Marley, Tosh, Burning Spear. A boy, maybe 14, took her hand with a smile and pulled her into the throng. She danced for a few moments; when she saw Zabuto, she obediently returned to him.
All the way home there was a twist in her step, a backbeat of her own.
It took an extra week of training to get her defensive stance right again.
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Survival
Once when she was 12, Sam Zabuto lost Kendra in a crowd.
He found her staring at a group of dancers in front of a flatbed truck with an old-fashioned sound system blasting bass-heavy music; Marley, Tosh, Burning Spear. A boy, maybe 14, took her hand with a smile and pulled her into the throng. She danced for a few moments; when she saw Zabuto, she obediently returned to him.
All the way home there was a twist in her step, a backbeat of her own.
It took an extra week of training to get her defensive stance right again.
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Date: 2013-02-18 01:01 am (UTC)But you capture how out of step with the times that way has become - and you capture her youthful yearning. Poor girl really never had a chance - if you're being trained to be a "death dealer", how and when can you fully experience joy?
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Date: 2013-02-18 02:01 pm (UTC)(I have a whole backstory for Zabuto in my head that I might turn into fic one day. Which is a lot to form on the basis of a name and a few vague allusions, and which in itself is a bit problematic with all sorts of post-colonial stuff, but... so far I've only written him once (http://beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com/28696.html#cutid1) and I wouldn't mind exploring him a bit further, even if he is practically an OC.)
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Date: 2013-02-18 08:47 pm (UTC)Zabuto basically being an OC is probably a good thing because it gives you plenty of room to play. So yes, consider this a request to write more about Zabuto's world, if your brain takes requests.
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Date: 2013-02-18 10:51 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-02-18 11:29 pm (UTC)