Drabble

Aug. 26th, 2010 01:25 am
beer_good_foamy: (Default)
[personal profile] beer_good_foamy
This is for [livejournal.com profile] deird1, who wanted a drabble about whipped cream.

When You Have To Go There
Post-NFA

After Dawn answers the door, they stare at each other for what feels like minutes.

“Is she in?” Spike finally asks.

“Patrolling. Creepy Roman catacombs.”

“Right.” He wraps the coat around himself, looking old and tired.

“We heard about LA. How did you... what about...”

“Long story.”

“Oh.” She nods. “Come in.”

Spike parks himself at the kitchen table, looking far away, doesn't look up until she puts a cup of hot cocoa in front of him. “Welcome home.” There's whipped cream melting on top, and he grips the cup tight.

Date: 2010-08-25 11:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] menomegirl.livejournal.com
Awwww. I like this, muchly.

Date: 2010-08-26 07:46 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-08-25 11:47 pm (UTC)
deird1: Fred looking pretty and thoughful (Default)
From: [personal profile] deird1
Yay! This is wonderful.

Date: 2010-08-26 07:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com
Glad you liked it - thanks!

Date: 2010-08-26 12:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eilowyn.livejournal.com
This makes me happy.

Date: 2010-08-26 07:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com
That makes me happy!

Date: 2010-08-26 12:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fangfaceandrea.livejournal.com
awww sweet Dawn. To me this is what happened after NFA.

Date: 2010-08-26 07:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com
Thanks! It's certainly one of the possibilities... don't you just love a closed canon? ;)

Date: 2010-08-26 12:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shadowkat67.livejournal.com
Love your drabbles. And drabbles are hard, they are like haiku except for prose. So kudos.

Date: 2010-08-26 08:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com
Thanks! And that's part of what I love about them. This one kept insisting on being either 99 or 102 words, for some reason...

Date: 2010-08-26 01:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vilajunkie.livejournal.com
D'aww! It's sugary sweet like whipped cream!

Date: 2010-08-26 07:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Whipped cream is not sweet! It should have no sugar or anything else added to it and so be no sweeter than fresh milk.

Date: 2010-08-26 08:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com
Damn straight!

Date: 2010-08-26 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vilajunkie.livejournal.com
LOL I was just trying to be clever, but I suppose American whipped cream does have some kind of sugar added. They put sugar (or high fructose corn syrup) in just about everything else here.

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Date: 2010-08-26 03:27 am (UTC)
snickfic: Buffy looking over her shoulder (Spike Dawn aww)
From: [personal profile] snickfic
Ohhhh. Poor tired Spike and the hot chocolate and going home. You're going to make me sniffle!

Date: 2010-08-26 08:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com
All part of my evil plan. :) Thanks!

Date: 2010-08-26 04:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spuffyduds.livejournal.com
Oh. Oh, that's lovely.

Date: 2010-08-26 08:12 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-08-26 07:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
Lovely - just right.

Date: 2010-08-26 08:13 am (UTC)

Date: 2010-08-26 09:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dulcedeusex.livejournal.com
*sigh* I've never written a fanfic drabble before. And I can never get over how awesome some people's drabbles are.

This was lovely. Warms the cockles it does. *g*

How could it not when it takes us back to BtVS Season 3 and the unlikely but solid friendship of Joyce and Spike in Lovers Walk?

Man I miss Joyce.

Great job as per usual BGF! xx Dulce

Date: 2010-08-26 12:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com
Thanks a lot!

How could it not when it takes us back to BtVS Season 3 and the unlikely but solid friendship of Joyce and Spike in Lovers Walk?

Yay, that's exactly what I was shooting for! Summers girls rule.

Date: 2010-08-26 09:31 am (UTC)
quinara: Spike and Buffy approaching 'their' tree in AYW. (Spuffy tree)
From: [personal profile] quinara
Aww, I love this lots and lots.

Date: 2010-08-26 12:39 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-08-26 12:36 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] ubi4soft.livejournal.com
Those Summers women, always have Spike at their little finger.

Love it

Date: 2010-08-26 12:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com
Heh, almost exactly what I just posted above. Thanks!

Date: 2010-08-26 12:42 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] ubi4soft.livejournal.com
well, it's canon anyway

Date: 2010-08-26 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rebcake.livejournal.com
With a few words, you've sketched a Spike that is very damaged indeed. I hope those Summers girls can heal him up. I foresee an ocean of tears...

Great job!

Date: 2010-08-26 06:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beer-good-foamy.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm not sure exactly what happened in LA, but it obviously wasn't a happy ending...

Date: 2010-08-26 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] diachrony.livejournal.com
Ooh, beautiful.

Date: 2010-08-26 06:56 pm (UTC)

Date: 2010-08-27 12:34 pm (UTC)
shapinglight: (Default)
From: [personal profile] shapinglight
Aww! That was so nice.

Date: 2010-08-29 05:01 pm (UTC)
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